Peer review process
Revised: This Reviewed Preprint has been revised by the authors in response to the previous round of peer review; the eLife assessment and the public reviews have been updated where necessary by the editors and peer reviewers.
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- Reviewing EditorPatrick ForcelliGeorgetown University, Washington, United States of America
- Senior EditorJohn HuguenardStanford University School of Medicine, Stanford, United States of America
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
The manuscript entitled "Autonomic reflex plasticity associates with time-dependent SUDEP susceptibility in a murine model with hyperactive stress circuits" by Dr. Saunders and colleagues combined a traditional mouse model of SUDEP, ventral intrahippocampal kainite (vIHKA) injection, with a genetic model of chronic hyperactivity of central corticotropin-releasing hormone (CRH) neurons (Kcc2/Crh) that further increases the risk of SUDEP in the weeks following seizure.
Strengths:
Their results show during spontaneous seizures Kcc2/Crh mice had more pronounced reflex-like ictal bradycardias compared to WT controls that notably occurred prior (~10 sec) to seizure termination and had greater autonomic disturbances compared to WT controls, including a pronounced serotonin-mediated Bezold Jarisch reflex. These results show chronic hyperactivity of central corticotropin-releasing hormone (CRH) neurons (Kcc2/Crh) increased autonomic disturbances and risk of SUDEP in a kainic acid model of epilepsy.
Weaknesses:
This study could be improved with a more thorough assessment of heart rate, blood pressure and breathing during and following the seizures, and in particular the fatal event. It is unclear if the bradycardias were spontaneous, or a result of preceding central or obstructive apneas, oxygen desaturations, hypercapnia, arrhythmias, or other possible triggers.
Considerable prior work in the literature suggests SUDEP could be mediated, in some patients, by a burst of parasympathetic activity to the heart. Were the heart rate changes in these animals during seizures inhibited or blocked by atropine, or atenolol? The injection of the 5HT agonist phenylbiguanide into the right jugular is not a selective approach for activating the Bezold Jarisch Reflex (BJR) which is caused by increased activity of intracardiac sensory neurons (generally activated with ischemia or a combination of low preload with high contractility). The results should be interpreted more cautiously, as a response to systemic administration of phenylbiguanide only.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
In this manuscript, the authors set out to evaluate the role of hypothalamic pituitary axis hyperactivity on cardiac and autonomic changes during epileptogenesis and following seizures in a mouse model of temporal lobe epilepsy. Epilepsy is very common. It can frequently result in death from sudden unexpected death in epilepsy, or SUDEP. SUDEP is thought to be at least in part due to seizure related cardiac and autonomic instability. Increased stress states are well known to be comorbid with epilepsy. This comorbidity is thought to increase the risk of SUDEP. Here the authors hypothesized that a mouse model of heightened stress in which there is hyperactivity of the CRH neurons in the hypothalamus would demonstrate exaggerated cardiac and autonomic effects of seizures and epilepsy.
Strengths:
For the chronic stress model, they employed the Kcc2/Crh mice that have a genetic deletion of the potassium chloride cotransporter in CRH neurons. They treated these mice and their wild type littermates with intra hippocampal kainic acid or saline, as epileptic and sham-treated animals respectively. The assessed cardiac activity, blood pressure, baroreflex, and the Bezold-Jerisch reflex during epileptogenesis. This in general is an interesting study. They make some interesting and potentially important observations regarding heart rate and blood pressure in seizures and epilepsy.
Weaknesses:
While the revised manuscript is much improved, there are still some concerns that should be addressed.
(1) The low-pressure baroreceptor responses they show in Figure 4 are somewhat confusing. Should they not be seeing a reflex increase in heart rate when blood pressure is lowered with sodium nitroprusside? It would be helpful if they could describe whether the control responses were as expected or not, and if not, why? This makes it difficult to assess changes seen in the different genotypes and conditions.
(2) It does not seem appropriate to label the assessments associated with Figure 5 as the Bezold Jarisch Reflex. This reflex involves bradycardia, hypotension, vasoconstriction, and hypopnea. They seem to be only looking at the cardiac component, which is likely mediated though peripheral 5HT3 receptors. Did they measure blood pressure and breathing? Can they include these? If they can only comment on HR, then the discussion should reflect this.
(3) In Figure 1B, it would be helpful to show some short (e.g., 0.5 sec) snippets of ECG traces that exemplify the changes in HR (spikes/second).
(4) The day 21 examples given in Figure 1B, do not seem to be representative of the data depicted in Figure 1C.
(5) From the top panel examples in Figure 2A it looks like there might be greater EEG suppression following seizures in the Kcc2/CRH mice. Was this consistent? It might be worth looking into.
(6) Can the authors include scale bars for the top panels in Figure 2A?
