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- Reviewing EditorRedmond O'ConnellTrinity College Dublin, Dublin, Ireland
- Senior EditorMichael FrankBrown University, Providence, United States of America
Reviewer #1 (Public review):
Summary:
In this paper, the authors combine a well-controlled decision-making task with a secondary probe task in order to understand how covert attention is shaped and how it influences the ongoing decision process. The authors report that the likelihood of overtly attending an alternative is shaped both by its decision relevance and its decision value. Further, covert attentional allocation comes at the expense of overt attentional allocation and attenuates the impact that covert gazes have on choice. Importantly, covert attentional allocation is dissociable from pre-saccadic activity. This paper sheds new light on the role of covert attention in decision-making. From an experimental aspect, the authors make excellent use of behavioural and process-tracing methods, presenting an exemplary paradigm that could be valuable to researchers working in related fields.
Strengths:
(1) The paper utilises a very rich and clever experimental design, which allows for probing covert attention at the level of a single trial. Extending the paradigm to ternary choices was an excellent addition. The decision task is also well-controlled. Overall, the results are very clearly presented, and the paper is very well written.
(2) The paper addresses important yet overlooked questions in decision neuroscience: what influences covert attention during decision-making and what is the functional relevance of covert attentional shifts. It is impressive that the authors are able to tackle these questions using behavioural and eye-tracking data alone.
(3) The authors thoroughly check that the secondary probe task can indeed be used as a proxy for covert attention. Checking that covert attentional allocation is dissociable from pre-saccadic activity was an excellent control.
Weaknesses:
(1) It is not clear why the decision task is described as "value-guided" instead of "perceptual". Participants receive momentary reward on the basis of their overall accuracy, but this is common practice in perceptual tasks. A value-based analogue of this task would provide trial-by-trial reward as a function of the perceptual magnitude (decision value) of the chosen stimulus. On a related note, the secondary task was not incentivised. The authors should further justify this choice.
(2) The authors do a great job in describing the determinants of covert attention. However, the relevant analyses are rather "phenomenological". It would be useful to try and dig further into the data in order to understand at a deeper, causal level these determinants. I suggest doing so by utilising in full the rich behavioural and overt attention data this paradigm offers. Specifically, the authors show that the higher the value of an alternative, the higher the likelihood this alternative is covertly attended. Decision values, however, could impact aspects of saccadic behaviour that directly influence covert attentional allocation (saccadic speed, dwell times, locus of gaze). At a more global level, decision value and/ or value difference could affect sampling behaviour (frequency of switching) or decision times, which can manifest in probe accuracy. Overall: a) overt sampling behaviour is at present reduced to the presence of saccades; but saccadic behaviour could be decomposed into richer metrics, b) although the task is "free-response", decision times are not analysed. Metrics based on a) and b) could be tested as mediating factors, enabling the authors to better understand the causal determinants of covert attention.
(3) The authors claim that covert attention attenuates: a) the impact of the last fixation on choice, b) the "time advantage" of the alternative that was overtly attended for longer. To further qualify these claims as functional/causal, further analyses are required. A few suggestions follow below. On trials where the "unattended" probe letter was successfully reported, the last fixation may exhibit different characteristics, which could explain away its reduced impact. For example, it may differ in duration, or it might correspond to a "switching" (rather than "staying" on the same alternative) saccade. These potential covariates need to be further examined. Additionally, correctly reporting unattended probes could come at the expense of decision accuracy due to dual task demands. If that is the case, then the reported attenuation of the impact of the last fixation could just be due to noisier responses. Similar points can be raised about the "time advantage", especially given that decision times do not feature in any of the analyses. More difficult decisions may lead to higher probe accuracy but also to prolonged decision times. The authors quantify the "time advantage" using cumulative fixation time, but perhaps relative metrics (e.g., relative fixation time or cumulative fixation time normalised by decision time) are better suited for this analysis.
Reviewer #2 (Public review):
Summary:
The authors combine a value-based choice task with a gaze-contingent covert attention paradigm to investigate how covert attention relates to value-guided decisions. This is an important and timely question, as many models of decision-making implicitly equate gaze with attention despite extensive evidence that covert attention can be dissociated from eye position. I particularly appreciated the relatively naturalistic task design, which allows participants to freely explore the options while covert attention is sampled during the decision process. Overall, the manuscript is well written, the experiments are carefully executed, and the analyses are generally appropriate and clearly presented.
My main reservation concerns the strength of some conceptual claims. The data convincingly demonstrate that covert attention can be decoupled from gaze and that probe report is modulated by option value. However, I found the evidence less directly supportive of the stronger conclusions that covert attention dynamically competes with overt attention throughout the decision process and that covert attention itself causally influences subsequent choice. Many of the reported analyses are consistent with these interpretations but, in my view, do not uniquely support them.
Strengths:
The manuscript addresses an important and timely question at the intersection of visual attention and value-based decision making. The experimental paradigm is elegant and relatively naturalistic, allowing covert attention to be sampled during ongoing decision making while participants freely explore the choice display. The experiments are carefully executed, and the analyses clearly demonstrate that covert attention can be dissociated from gaze and is systematically modulated by option value. The control analyses addressing the contribution of presaccadic attention are an important addition that substantially strengthens the manuscript, even though I had questions regarding their interpretation.
Weaknesses:
(1) Interpreting the causal role of covert attention in guiding choice
The manuscript puts forward two central conclusions: first, that covert attention is shaped by decision-relevant factors such as option value; and second, that covert attention, in turn, influences subsequent choice behavior. I found the evidence for the first conclusion compelling. My reservations concern the second conclusion, namely whether the current data uniquely establish a causal influence of covert attention on choice. Throughout the manuscript, the authors conclude that covert attention exerts "downstream consequences for choice behavior" and that an estimate of covert attention "influences the final choice." However, I am not sure that the presented analyses fully disentangle a causal influence of covert attention from a common influence of option value on both covert attention and the eventual decision.
One aspect that illustrates this concern is the interpretation of the last-fixation bias. While the reported association between the final fixation and the chosen option is clear, it is less obvious that the final fixation itself biases the subsequent choice. An equally plausible interpretation is that participants have largely committed to a decision and subsequently direct one final gaze shift toward the option they have already selected before executing the button press. In other words, the relationship may reflect choice influencing gaze rather than gaze influencing choice. Unless the temporal dynamics allow these alternatives to be distinguished, I would encourage the authors to use more neutral language (e.g., an association between last fixation and subsequent choice) or explicitly discuss this alternative interpretation.
More generally, I found myself looking for a more direct demonstration that covert attention biases choice toward the attended option. Most analyses ask whether successful peripheral probe report attenuates established gaze-related choice biases, such as the last-fixation or time-advantage bias. While these are interesting findings, they remain relatively indirect. A particularly compelling demonstration would be to examine situations in which option value cannot explain the relationship between covert attention and choice.
(2) Dynamic competition between covert attention and overt attention
I think one of the key strengths of this manuscript is its explicit attempt to dissociate covert attention from gaze-a distinction that is often overlooked in both empirical studies and computational models of value-based decision making. My reservation concerns the stronger claim that covert attention is dynamically reallocated during decision making and competes with overt attention. The present results clearly show that covert attention can be dissociated from gaze, but I found less direct evidence for the proposed dynamic competition. Throughout the experiments, probe report accuracy remains highest at the currently fixated option, whereas peripheral benefits, although reliable, are comparatively modest (e.g., Figures 2 and 3). This raises the question of how often, and under which circumstances, covert attention is actually reallocated away from the current fixation.
Because the authors possess precise eye-movement timing, I think the manuscript would be substantially strengthened by an analysis of attentional dynamics within individual fixations, to provide more direct support for the proposed dynamic interplay between covert and overt attention.
More generally, I found several interpretations somewhat stronger than the presented evidence. For example, the statement that increased covert attention to higher-valued peripheral options occurs "at the expense of" overt attention at the fixated location seems to imply a direct trade-off that is not explicitly demonstrated. Unless such temporal dynamics can be shown, I would encourage the authors to distinguish more clearly between demonstrating that covert attention can be dissociated from gaze and demonstrating that it dynamically competes with overt attention throughout the decision process.
(3) Dissociating covert from presaccadic attention
The control analyses aimed at dissociating covert from presaccadic attention are an important strength of the manuscript. However, I found the rationale underlying these analyses difficult to follow. The key conclusion-that value modulates probe report even when covert attention is not presaccadic-rests on the distinction illustrated in Figure 6, yet it remained unclear to me exactly how this distinction isolates presaccadic from non-presaccadic covert attention. My understanding is that the authors compare probe performance at previously fixated locations depending on whether those locations are subsequently re-fixated. If this interpretation is correct, a more explicit explanation of why this operationalization isolates presaccadic attention would help readers evaluate this conclusion. Conceptually, I found it more intuitive to think about a dissociation based on probe performance at locations that are subsequently fixated versus not subsequently fixated following the first fixation, when the currently fixated option, the upcoming saccade target, and a third unfixated option are distinct. Such situations would seem to provide the clearest opportunity to separate attentional enhancement associated with the upcoming saccade target from covert attention directed elsewhere.
I also found the interpretation of the time-to-saccade control stronger than the evidence directly supports. The authors argue that a purely presaccadic account predicts a monotonic decline in probe accuracy as a function of time-to-saccade. This assumption seems stronger than supported by the presaccadic attention literature, which primarily characterizes attentional enhancement during approximately the final 100-200 ms before saccade onset. Within this temporal window, the present data actually appear consistent with such an increase (Figure S6). By contrast, I am not aware of theoretical or empirical work predicting a monotonic presaccadic attentional shift extending hundreds of milliseconds, or even a second, before saccade onset.
The observed U-shaped relationship is nevertheless inconsistent with a simple presaccadic-only account, as probe performance remains elevated even when the upcoming saccade is relatively distant. I therefore agree that the findings suggest additional attentional processes. However, I do not think they uniquely establish that probe performance indexes covert attention independently of presaccadic planning.